Solar system

Saturn

Saturn is a yellowish brown color and is one of the four gas giants,It is mostly made of hydrogen so there is no solid ground at all.Saturn is the second biggest planet in the solar system.

Saturn was formed like all of the other planets by solar nebula.The solar nebula was cloud,cold gas and dust which somehow got disturbed perhaps by colliding with another cloud or the shock waves from supernova.

Saturn is a really cold planet it’s normal temperature is minus 178 degrees celsius.

Saturns rings were formed by Comets,Asteroids and even other moons colliding around saturn a exploded because of saturn’s strong gravity.They also have chunks of ice.

Saturn was named after the a roman god called saturnus.

There has never been life on saturn because it is made of mostly hydrogen so if you try to stand on saturn you go into the middle and get crushed in the middle of saturn.But Titan saturn’s biggest moon has lakes and ice volcanoes.

Saturn has around 62 moons and some are still to be discovered.

Saturn distance from the sun is 1,433,000,000km.

Saturn’s length of day is 10 hours and 39 minutes.

Winds race around the atmosphere of saturn at 800 km per hour.

Saturn has a very strong magnetic field which traps energy particles which causes a high level of radiation.

Saturn goes around the sun extremely slowly, a year on saturn is twenty nine years on earth.

Saturn's largest moons are Titan and Rhea.

Saturn is a large planet that has sixty two moons and rings made of ice,comets,asteroids and other moons.Saturn has strong winds and a magnetic force that traps energy particles which causes it to have a strong radiation.

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While I was floating to the bottom I saw dolphins,fish,sharks and a whole bunch of other underwater animals.Suddenly I quickly fell and landed in a little cave the water had disappeared. In the corner of my eye I saw it………THE MAGICAL AMULET(>_<).

As I was walking towards the amulet suddenly obstacles started appearing throughout the cave.

First I had to jump over incredibly high walls.I made it to the next obstacle.I had to go across the waters ruled by the king of the waters…………....SHARKS.Thankfully I had to swing on vines.”YES”I made it across now onto the third obstacles.I have to dodge balls of raspberry jelly to make it to the last obstacle but instead of dodging them I decided to try get it in my mouth.I’m so close now I only have to complete this lazer maze.

Thats it, its just an inch away from my hand so I slowly reached out and grabbed it.Suddenly the cave started crumbling down on me.I had to run to the start as quick as I could but that meant I had to go through the obstacles again.I made it out just in time.I took the amulet home and the magic started working.ZOOM I was in a parallel universe.

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While I was diving to the bottom I saw dolphins,fish,sharks and a whole bunch of other animals.Suddenly I quickly fell and landed in a little cave there was no water any more.

In the corner of my eye I saw it……….THE MAGICAL AMULET(>_<).

As I was walking towards the amulet suddenly obstacles started appearing everywhere.

First I had to jump over really high walls.I made to the next obstacle.I have to swing across the waters ruled by the sharks on some vines.”YES”I made it across now onto the third obstacles.I have to dodge balls of jelly to make it to the last obstacle but instead of dodging it I decided to try get it in my mouth.I’m so close now I only have to complete this lazer maze.

Thats it, its just an inch away from my hand so I slowly reached out and grabbed it.Suddenly the cave started crumbling down on me.I had to run to the start as quick as I could but that meant I had to go through the obstacles again.I made it out just in time.I took the amulet home and the magic started working.ZOOM I was in another world.

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While I was diving to the bottom I saw dolphins,fish,sharks and a whole bunch of other animals. Suddenly I quickly fell and landed in a little cave there was no water any more.

In the corner of my eye I saw it……….THE MAGICAL AMULET(>_<).

As I was walking towards the amulet suddenly obstacles started appearing everywhere.

First I had to jump over really high walls.I made to the next obstacle.I have to swing across the waters ruled by the sharks on some vines.”YES”I made it across now onto the third obstacles.I have to dodge balls of jelly to make it to the last obstacle but instead of dodging it I decided to try get it in my mouth.I’m so close now I only have to complete this lazer maze.

Thats it, its just an inch away from my hand so I slowly reached out and grabbed it.Suddenly the cave started crumbling down on me.I had to run to the start as quick as I could but that meant I had to go through the obstacles again.I made it out just in time.I took the amulet home and the magic started working.ZOOM I was in another world